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Utterly Alone...

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone
no one is there
to hear my secrets
no one is there
to hear my fears

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone
no one is there
to hold my hand
no one is there
to kiss my tears

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone
You aren't there
to hold me in your arms
You aren't there
to tell me I'm loved

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone...



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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 1:44 am:
wow very deep. it kind of almost scared me. so many people feel like this all the time, and i think just a friend can fix that :) but wow the poem is great! so much emotion, and sooooo much truth.. you expressed the feelings so well! bravo my friend, 5 stars :) check out some of my work and comment please :)
 
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evil_naiad said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 9:09 am:
I like the way you use repetition here...
 
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Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2009 at 10:49 pm:
This gives me goosebumps. I can relate to this poem so well. That's the thing about your work, everyone can relate to it in some fashion and I think that's what makes you special because it is rare that I find things like this. ZERO
 
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