Utterly Alone...

July 12, 2009
By xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone
no one is there
to hear my secrets
no one is there
to hear my fears

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone
no one is there
to hold my hand
no one is there
to kiss my tears

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone
You aren't there
to hold me in your arms
You aren't there
to tell me I'm loved

darkness surrounds
I am utterly alone...

The author's comments:
The narrator of this poem is feeling alone and abandoned by the one they love. They are lonely and the one they love isn't there to comfort them and listen to them.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Aug. 25 2009 at 1:44 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow very deep. it kind of almost scared me. so many people feel like this all the time, and i think just a friend can fix that :) but wow the poem is great! so much emotion, and sooooo much truth.. you expressed the feelings so well! bravo my friend, 5 stars :) check out some of my work and comment please :)

on Jul. 24 2009 at 9:09 am
evil_naiad PLATINUM, Afton, Virginia
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I like the way you use repetition here...

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 22 2009 at 10:49 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

This gives me goosebumps. I can relate to this poem so well. That's the thing about your work, everyone can relate to it in some fashion and I think that's what makes you special because it is rare that I find things like this. ZERO

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