Follow Your Dreams

July 10, 2009
follow your dreams, follow them well
if you do it right we'll be able to tell
wether your an athlete or your a poet
your life is a boat so just row, row, row it
if you wanna box or if you wanna sing
oh there goes the bell i can here it ring





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Brian_Lambert said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 5:34 pm
This is amazing. A very good heartfelt message... Your a good writer, and i like how you can say so much with so little.. *is totally jealus of talent*
 
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 7:53 pm
woww. this is awesome. u really r talented with the rhyming scheme & i just luv how u write ur pieces!!
 
distant_dreamer said...
Aug. 30, 2009 at 2:17 am
Great work! Short, but sweet, and heart felt! It's true just follow your dreams!!!! :) Check out some of my work sometime! :) Thanks!
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:52 pm
You can deff see the heart in it. It's a verry nice poem you don't sugar coat it by making it realy long you just say what you think. It's really good.
 
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