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July 10, 2009
By silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3


you;
speak loudly,
yelling.
what did i do now?

you;
pull back your fist,
screaming.
i tense for the blow.

you;
hit me hard,
angry.
but it doesnt hurt me anymore.

you;
pull back now,
enraged.
and i stay standing still.

you;
have hurt me again.
how could a mother do this to her child?
all i want is to be your friend.



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on Feb. 10 2010 at 10:24 am
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3

thank you! (: i like this poem too. check out some of my other work if you like this kind of writing style...a lot of my poems are short and sweet. thank you for your support. (:

on Feb. 9 2010 at 2:18 pm
EmilyRosiePosie BRONZE, Hancock, Maine
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this is good like really good i never thought so few words could mean so much

on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:28 pm
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
68 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3

no, it didnt happen to me. a lot of my poems are based on the hurt and pain i have inside of me and i just let it out...most of my poems arent true, just the concept of the pain is. :) thank you!

Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 10:11 am
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

I like your style but the content of it made me want to cry. I understand what it's about but I hope it didn't actually happen to you. It's kinda sad.. =,(


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