July 9, 2009
By cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This pain inside of me.
Has got to be let free.
This pain is holding me down.
Giving me a frown.
I can get any rest,
Because of so much stress.
I'm sick of this mess.
This is affecting my action,
affecting my life.
With a true real dad.
My dad lying to my face.
I just wanted to get the mace.
No, I shouldn't have got the mace.
I forgive you dad,
Even though you brought hell to my life.
I still don't want to have anything to do with you.
For you mom I have you back, When I make it big.
I wont forget you.
This pain inside of me.
Is no longer here.
Because I got ride of the problem.
I forgave my dad for me not for him.
Now it's joy inside of me.

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 1:07 pm
JasonsBaby GOLD, Spencer, West Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
when i get mad i tend to tell people to "go suck a fart"

I understand completley, my parents are divorced and I love my mom and stepdad, but my dad and stepmom are always fighting and they treat me like dirt so I hardly ever talk to them. I totaly understood this poem, nice job!

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