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my poems, they take away the pain
they numb the sting
and wipe the stain

They bring me closer
to how I feel
They give me life
And make me real

They summon these emotions
I’ve written for you
They scream yet whisper
All I would do

Convert religion, change my way
become anything
for you to stay

so this is what I’ve felt…
to be in love
in this emotion
for you…my dove

but when i was told
bout' that kiss
my heart, was torn
my love amiss

so for that action
that was brought to me
my eyes are now open
and for this,… I see

That i can only wish
this is no lie....
that he loves you...
as much as I…

so here it is, all laid out
poems you inspired
for me to write and shout

For here you will see…
…see into me
That which I reveal…
Reveal to you

The passions of my mind
I am sorry
If some aren’t kind

But this is what I felt,
what I feel for you
And even though
We may be through

I will always care for you my dear
And if there is a time
When you so fear

Come to me
For I am here

And if there is a time
when you need a hand
A shoulder to cry on….
For you I stand

With my love
and Love’s first brand

And if there is a time
when you are cold
Of lack of warmth
Or a lover’s fold

I give you my heart
So you can hold

To hold on nights so cool and blue
Upon winter’s eve or mornings dew
Hold it tight; let it keep you warm
And keep you wary upon the storm

Now As much as I wish
To continue writing
I must stop
Though my heart is fighting

But if I continue to write
my beautiful flower
I fear you will grow sad
And our friendship sour

So with this I finish
my dear so fair
And toast to the great times
And memories we share

So goodbye my one
My dear so lovely
A leap well leapt
For you, my only

أنا أحبك





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robert This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 4:52 pm
Yeah, thanks, that is what a good friend of mine was telling me and i totally agree. I am trying a new style, and it seems to be a little more, compact. Once again thanks for your input :) that is the only way that i can get better :D
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 2:54 am
I really like this. Although I feel much fluff wss added to this. It lost its meaning as it was nearing the end.
 
DIE,love,GO said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 1:58 pm
A very emotionally stirring piece, but if you leave your heart there, it's liable for more pain...
 
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