I Think of You

July 8, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


When I watch the clouds,
I think of you,
Because every time I see you,
I feel like flying.

When I see a red strawberry,
I think of you,
Because every time you catch me looking at you,
My cheeks turn the exact color.

When I see the green leaves of a tree,
I think of your eyes,
Because when you look at me,
They show their true color,

When I see a blue sky,
I think of you,
Because summer is here,
And I’m far away from you.


The author's comments:
This one is about a guy that i DO like. It was really hard to think of something for me blushing and the red color? that was difficult.

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on Feb. 27 2010 at 3:19 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

thank you. :)

on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:37 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I find this poem beautiful and expresses the feelings well, but i do have to suggest to watch the wording- try to get it to flow a little bit more. This can be a bit of a challenge though and can get better the more you write.

on Dec. 22 2009 at 3:51 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

:D thank you nicovera!

on Dec. 22 2009 at 12:03 am
Arluanna PLATINUM, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Mwahahahahaha! Now you are mine, Lesley-Bird, finally, at last, in my... oh, drat, forgot it had wings...”

-Phil, the youngest Kalins Uzin

It was beautiful! Rated

on Sep. 2 2009 at 8:27 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

thank you Kamarin H. ur so nice! :)

kamarin said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 5:33 pm
kamarin, Dayton, Ohio
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sooo sweet

i loved it

on Sep. 2 2009 at 4:48 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Thank you guys so much for the comments and the new teen ink is just.... SO KOOL!! bahaha.

on Aug. 11 2009 at 4:30 pm
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
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AWWW this is so cute. i love this poem. i like it. this is very sweet. thinking about your crush or boyfriend like that. awwwwww. great poem . :D God Bless. :D

on Jul. 28 2009 at 12:31 pm
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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thanks so much for the nice comments on my work! =)



I love your poem too! it's pretty much adorable, I love the very first part a LOT it's really cute.

on Jul. 23 2009 at 8:13 pm
lusciouslucius BRONZE, Lake Peekskill, New York
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That's really sweet!

on Jul. 18 2009 at 8:37 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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wow, so sweet <3 haha, that's true, i couldn't think of anything for red either. i love strawberries anyhow so it's great! i lovee the last stanza (:

on Jul. 18 2009 at 4:03 am
one_of_a_kind_girl GOLD, N/A, California
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Thats cute :)


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