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When I watch the clouds,
I think of you,
Because every time I see you,
I feel like flying.

When I see a red strawberry,
I think of you,
Because every time you catch me looking at you,
My cheeks turn the exact color.

When I see the green leaves of a tree,
I think of your eyes,
Because when you look at me,
They show their true color,

When I see a blue sky,
I think of you,
Because summer is here,
And I’m far away from you.





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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:37 pm
I find this poem beautiful and expresses the feelings well, but i do have to suggest to watch the wording- try to get it to flow a little bit more. This can be a bit of a challenge though and can get better the more you write.
 
~*)Wish(*~ replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:19 pm
thank you. :)
 
Nicovera said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 12:03 am
It was beautiful! Rated
 
~*HopelesslyCrushed*~ replied...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 3:51 pm
:D thank you nicovera!
 
Kamarin H. said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 5:33 pm
sooo sweet
i loved it
 
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ replied...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 8:27 pm
thank you Kamarin H. ur so nice! :)
 
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 4:48 pm
Thank you guys so much for the comments and the new teen ink is just.... SO KOOL!! bahaha.
 
Dreamer123 said...
Aug. 11, 2009 at 4:30 pm
AWWW this is so cute. i love this poem. i like it. this is very sweet. thinking about your crush or boyfriend like that. awwwwww. great poem . :D God Bless. :D
 
camille_1441 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2009 at 12:31 pm
thanks so much for the nice comments on my work! =)

I love your poem too! it's pretty much adorable, I love the very first part a LOT it's really cute.
 
lusciouslucius said...
Jul. 23, 2009 at 8:13 pm
That's really sweet!
 
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 18, 2009 at 8:37 pm
wow, so sweet <3 haha, that's true, i couldn't think of anything for red either. i love strawberries anyhow so it's great! i lovee the last stanza (:
 
one_of_a_kind_girl said...
Jul. 18, 2009 at 4:03 am
Thats cute :)
 
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