I Hate You

January 14, 2009
I hate you for destroying my family
Ripping out the broken seams that held us all together
Destroying the bond we shared

Your strong harsh words

Tainted my heart

And broke the glass that shattered my soul

The wounds you inflicted

The people you scarred
The daughter you abused



Moving Houses

Split Parenting

New families

I hate you for ruining my life
What seemed to be a fairytale life
Was shamed by your careless practices
Triggered by misogynous concepts
And the presence of your favorite beer

Look what you've done to me
It's hard to trust
It's hard to love

When altercations arise
The flashback starts

Your angry face

Your painful smack

I hate you for what you've done to me.
I hate what you've done to yourself.
But most of all, I hate you for destroying my family.

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jesss95 said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 6:14 pm
i have no words this is absolutely magnificent...i almost started crying while reading this.
Sandy K. said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 9:50 pm
wow whats an amazing poem. I can feel your anger and hurt as i read every line you wrote. It was so deep and full of emotion. Wonderful.
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 1:22 am
:'( that was a highly emotional strong poem every word throbed with anger and saddness. AMAZING I LOVED IT!
GlassHeart said...
Jul. 14, 2009 at 7:16 pm
Wow. I liked it.
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 11:18 pm
I can tell this is about a parent. i can completely relate. And I wrote a poem like this one a while ago. I love how this is written. Amazing job.
Jordon.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 6:54 pm
i totally get this, i can really really understand it. sounds like my life story to be honest. x
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