July 7, 2009
It’s sad.
It’s made me cry many times before.
And it’s sweet-Oh, how I know it complete.
And I’ve had many lovers before, but you are not like the others.
You’re a peacock among sparrows.
Your beauty shines-Oh, how radiant!
But why must you take this joy away from me?
Why must you take away the glee?
You have never experienced this joy before,
So I will give this love a wait.
I would be so happy if you would agree with me,
But until then I bid ye a farewell.
Because love is sad and it’s sweet and I know it complete,
So don’t try to deplete my love, for I will wait.

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Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 2:40 pm
It was really good. The main background of it sort of seems like some of my poems. [They are all inspired by the famous "YOU." I liked it!
awesomeaugust This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 1:32 pm
I like it a lot ~I'd love any comments you have on my poems and stories~
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