Just a Dream

July 6, 2009
By .AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.” -James Dean
"You can say whatever you want about me, but I am the only one that knows the truth"

Sometimes it gets too tough
Love is not enough
My mind starts to go crazy
Thinking about you baby
The sounds need to stop
My ears might pop
I could scream
Is this just a dream?
Tears ran down my face
It seems they were falling into place
I can’t sleep at night
When I know nothing’s right
Will this ever end
Me being a pretend
I could scream
Is this just a dream?
If I close my eyes
Will there be a surprise
If I give our love another try
Would it in in a cry?
I can’t even see
How we were meant to be
I could scream
But I know this is just a dream

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This article has 3 comments.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:27 am
Haha, I really don't know about the country part......I just read the words..hahahahaha. Anyway, it was really good!

on Jul. 15 2009 at 9:55 pm
hmballet BRONZE, Cumming, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
And so we know and rely on the love God has for us. GOD IS LOVE. Whoever lives in love lives in God, and God in him. -1 John 4:16

This sounds like a country song. I like it. Good work. ☺

Dr. A. said...
on Jul. 14 2009 at 12:34 pm
This poem sounds like a cross between pop and country. It could be a song. Once again - good use of imagry and passion.

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