Heaven or Hell

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The diference is unspoken,
One better than the other.
My lies cover my truth,
Trying hard not to harm another.

I run from my pain,
Covering the trail I leave behind.
I hide from the ones that love me,
So they don't find out i've lied.

Having not found trust,
I am unable to be trusted.
Telling the truth may be hard,
But I really must.

The uncertainess is harming,
But you do what you have to.
Knowing you may hate me,
Is what I should recieve
for lieing to you.

Should I say I'm sorry,
Or tell you another lie.
If you tell me to leave you alone,
should I break down and cry.

If I should die this very day,
Where would I go Heaven or Hell.
I may have fixed my wrongs,
but i'm still not in the right mind to tell.





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MercedesXO said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:36 pm

this is really really great. the 5th and 6th verses were my favorite:) great job!!

i'd love it if you (or anyone else reading this) would check out my work and see what you think. Especially my poem 'Torturer of a King.' I'd appriciate it!

 
HannahJane said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 5:26 pm
WOW SOMEONE NEEDS TO PUBLIsh THIS
 
Collado92 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 3:28 pm
Nicely put, i like this, its good =)
 
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 3:19 pm
in luvvv this!! the rhyming @ the end makes it all the more deep. plz keep writing!!
 
KumKiiMoo!! said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 4:38 am
wow this is true!
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 7:45 pm
I really do like this! It is emotion-filled and true.
 
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