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You have captured me
With a stroke of your finger
The brush of your skin
Makes me linger
In this moment for a little longer
Short of breath
My heart beats stronger
From this fire
Coursing through my veins
I'll stay right here
Endure the pain
If it means that I'll be next to you
For one more instant
I would go through
Hell if time would only stop
I'll halt the sun
Break all the clocks
So we could stay
Unburdened, untouched
Cradled in that first light of day
Never leaving this home we've discovered
Wrapped in love
Beside one another




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BleedingRose said...
May 1, 2010 at 8:57 pm:

Very deep and very incredible!  Totally awesome sauce!  Very good descriptions and capturing of feelings.   I <3 it!

-Rose

 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:36 pm:
whoa. this is amazingg. its so deep. i luvv the descriptions! i completely agree, u r really very talented
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 5:18 pm:
luvv it. poetry definetly is a strong point 4 u. ur really talented
 
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despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 2:31 am:
Beautiful, I love it, and I plan to check out more of your work. I'd love it if you would read some of mine and I'd love to read your comments! Thanks so much! Again, your poem is phenomenal.
 
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cree8ive said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 1:19 am:
nice poem, i like it. you should maybe consider not capitalizing the beginning of each line. not that it's wrong the way it is, but just something to consider. would you mind reading some of my work? i'd appreciate the criticism!
 
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