It's Still Love

July 7, 2009
By cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
16 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure." Mariane Williamson


You’re not the hero saving the day,
just the coward who runs and hides.
You’re awkward and shy,
And I have to push before you move.

If life were a movie
you wouldn’t have the lead role.
You’d be at the end of the credits
playing a forgotten part.

You’re no Prince Charming
Guess I won’t get that slipper back
happily ever after was too cliché,
at least that’s what you say.

No one expects you to astonish
Most people don’t know you’re there
You sleepwalk through life,
And nobody really cares.

You are no Romeo,
I don’t get a fairy tale romance.
But it’s still love to me.



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on Dec. 16 2009 at 3:21 pm
shouting2Bsilent PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Feet, what do I need you for if I have wings to fly?

This is well done. Wait no....that sounds like something you'd say about a piece of steak, shoot, now I want some steak. Anywho, I like a bunch! It's a twist on the old told tale of "Romeo". I'm going to be coming around to read your other works pretty often if this is what you present. ^.^ woot! :D

Lyric81 SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 11:39 pm
Lyric81 SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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too cute. it's a very lovable and realistic way of presenting Romeo despite the images movies depict

on Nov. 5 2009 at 2:17 pm
MrsChelseaElder SILVER, Knox, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Its only a mistake if you never learn from it.

This is really good. I actually understood what it was about. Which is a hard thing to do when reading and writing poetry. But it speaks to me :D its really pretty.

on Jul. 12 2009 at 11:54 pm
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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Love it! Sometimes the guys who aren't your average romeo are the best ones

on Jul. 11 2009 at 5:26 pm
Teenqueen BRONZE, Pune, Other
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aww...its really gud:)cn u read mine n let me kno if u like it..Urs was too gud!!

on Jul. 10 2009 at 10:20 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

Awww that was sweet!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 10 2009 at 3:22 pm
Honestly, I liked it a lot!!!! It was personally really good :D

on Jul. 10 2009 at 9:51 am
really really sweet :)

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2009 at 4:23 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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haha cute


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