Escape

July 7, 2009
By xNightWingx BRONZE, Toronto, Hawaii
xNightWingx BRONZE, Toronto, Hawaii
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My heart beats fast,
as i try to escape,
what i'm escaping from, i have no idea,
i just know that i have to get out,
run, run, my mind screams,
yet my feet stay frozen to the ground,
and my brain shuts down,
why i have no idea,
but slowly i loose feeling and everything goes numb,
and i realize that if i can't run pyhically away,
i'll go mentally,
so i bring my knees up to my chin, and bend over them, tuck my elbows inside and close my eyes,
and pray that i'll end up somewhere other then here,
because they pain, i feel now is unbearable,
but one last thought, before i enter into oblivion with open arms, passes through my mind
at least when i run away through my mind,
i'll never have to stop.

The author's comments:
yup..this might suck, but my friend wanted me to write something so that she could read it.
and it like took me like a total of three minutes to come up with this. SO DON'T JUDGE ME.

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on Jul. 21 2009 at 9:57 pm
Rebecca Pitts SILVER, Quinlan, Texas
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I love your poem,its awsome! i can relate because ive felt like that before.One word bravo!!!!:)

on Jul. 18 2009 at 8:33 pm
xNightWingx BRONZE, Toronto, Hawaii
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really... thanks.

samiam7 said...
on Jul. 12 2009 at 5:03 am
This is great, it can be interpreted in so many different ways, keep writing, good job


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