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July 2, 2009
By athena marsh BRONZE, Biloxi, Mississippi
athena marsh BRONZE, Biloxi, Mississippi
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alone behind a door
bones so sore
mind so bored
what more to ask for
alone behind a door
bones sore
cold to the core
he left you alone
he promised forever
who knew forever was so short
alone behind a door
a girl weeps
why did you go



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on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:12 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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on Mar. 2 2010 at 2:44 pm
justsamm. GOLD, Haverhill, Massachusetts
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hide my face;
from my tears.
my weakest link
controls my fears.

breath taking

bmmsdp said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:10 am
it tells a story of a little girl that is being

abused. that is what i think

BMMSCC said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:08 am
very good!!

Sumana said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:46 am
Beautiful.

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:57 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

awww i like it. <3


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