Drowning

July 5, 2009
By Anonymous

Out of control
Keeping me under tow
Drowning in my own words
Cant seem to speak or even breathe
Your eyes are all around me
I try and yell
And reach for help
But you keep on staring
Forcing me under.........


The author's comments:
It decribes the way i feel sometimes wheni feel helpless...

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on Jul. 13 2009 at 1:16 am
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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I like it, there are so many times when I feel like this.

JustMe212 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 8:15 pm
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)

not bad :)its short,butdeep

JustMe212 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 7:31 pm
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)

Thats pretty good :) keep it up

JustMe212 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 6:59 pm
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)

Hey guys!! Please do comment:) good or bad i like feedback :)


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