Drowning

By , Atlanta, GA
Out of control
Keeping me under tow
Drowning in my own words
Cant seem to speak or even breathe
Your eyes are all around me
I try and yell
And reach for help
But you keep on staring
Forcing me under.........





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xXFadedFlowerXx said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 1:16 am
I like it, there are so many times when I feel like this.
 
JustMe said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 8:15 pm
not bad :)its short,butdeep
 
JustMe said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 7:31 pm
Thats pretty good :) keep it up
 
JustMe said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 6:59 pm
Hey guys!! Please do comment:) good or bad i like feedback :)
 
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