rejection letter

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i walked outside
in my torn-up robe
and went to the mailbox
the neighbor called
from his lawn
the mail was dirty
bills and credit card offers
than one
i ripped it open there
were sorry
it said
we cant publish it
too dirty
too gruesome
too suspicious
whatever
and threw it on the ground
for the garbagemen to collect





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AbbyNormal9 said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 2:55 am
Very good. The tone is very emotionless, bleak, but that almost made it feel more dramatic. Like underneath it, there was something bigger than a rejection letter. An apathy to the world in general. I don't know. Anyway, it was good. And I'm not usually a fan of poetry.
 
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