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July 2, 2009
By camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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1,2 step
1,2 step
Turn me around,
Look in your eyes ,
Our feet leave the ground.
1,2 times
1.2 times
2 is all we need,
2 chances at love,
Just you and just me.
Our second chance,
We messed up before,
Now we’re learning to dance.
1.2 step
1,2 step
Holding my hand,
I loved you before,
Now I love you again.
1,2 breathe
1,2 breathe
So scared that I’m wrong,
That you made a change,
I don’t want to move on.
1.2 you
1,2 me
2 is all we need,


The author's comments:
This is about a girl who is super nervous about falling in love again with her ex who is really all to perfect for her, the dance represents how the two lovers danced back and forth as two seperate people (1 and 2) over what they wanted untill they decide to be thogether at the end (notice the last two lines simply say 2 instead of 1 and 2 because they are a couple now)

Comments and feedback are SO WELCOME! thanks for reading!

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on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:46 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awesome.

THIS is brilliant.

tor10jax GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 4:10 am
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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This poem has really good rythm, and I love the repetition and how you changed the last word in the phrase. I'm not sure if the periods were used instead of the commas on purpose or if it was an accident. I'd watch out for that type of thing because everything can have importance in a poem, including punctuation.

Keep writing!

on Aug. 17 2009 at 11:28 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

hey that was pretty cool and unique so diffrent from the origanal love poems. which i love that part!!! oh by the way thanks for the comment

on Aug. 17 2009 at 3:50 pm
ramnapotter PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
26 articles 1 photo 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow...”

Wow.

Very well done.

Your message and how you said, is once again, great.

on Jul. 30 2009 at 4:25 am
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

I picked up that you enjoy writing about love, and thats original. But your style is very different...in a really good way.

on Jul. 17 2009 at 4:16 pm
AudienceofOne BRONZE, Alexandria, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I write. Though whether that helps me keep my sanity or makes me lose it I shall never know.

I liked how it had sort of an abstract meaning and not just plain and out there. It's something you can get your own image of, or you can see it from the writer's eye. Excellent work!

Lindsey_O GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2009 at 8:59 pm
Lindsey_O GOLD, Marshfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Words slide off the lead,
creating permanent marks;
writer's secret code.
~Lindsey O'Connell

that was beautiful! great idea, and awesome job!


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