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July 2, 2009
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1,2 step
1,2 step
Turn me around,
Look in your eyes ,
Our feet leave the ground.
1,2 times
1.2 times
2 is all we need,
2 chances at love,
Just you and just me.
Our second chance,
We messed up before,
Now we’re learning to dance.
1.2 step
1,2 step
Holding my hand,
I loved you before,
Now I love you again.
1,2 breathe
1,2 breathe
So scared that I’m wrong,
That you made a change,
I don’t want to move on.
1.2 you
1,2 me
2 is all we need,





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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:46 am
Awesome.
THIS is brilliant.
 
tor10jax said...
Aug. 30, 2009 at 4:10 am
This poem has really good rythm, and I love the repetition and how you changed the last word in the phrase. I'm not sure if the periods were used instead of the commas on purpose or if it was an accident. I'd watch out for that type of thing because everything can have importance in a poem, including punctuation.
Keep writing!
 
Chibbie said...
Aug. 17, 2009 at 11:28 pm
hey that was pretty cool and unique so diffrent from the origanal love poems. which i love that part!!! oh by the way thanks for the comment
 
Ramna said...
Aug. 17, 2009 at 3:50 pm
Wow.
Very well done.
Your message and how you said, is once again, great.
 
alayapoetgirl said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 4:25 am
I picked up that you enjoy writing about love, and thats original. But your style is very different...in a really good way.
 
AudienceofOne said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 4:16 pm
I liked how it had sort of an abstract meaning and not just plain and out there. It's something you can get your own image of, or you can see it from the writer's eye. Excellent work!
 
lindsey_O said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 8:59 pm
that was beautiful! great idea, and awesome job!
 
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