I’m Done With You

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What’s the best way to get over this breakup?
I’ve fallen in love
We kissed and we’ve made up.
I said I forgave you for all that you did,
You said you were sorry for all that you hid,
Now I keep thinking it’s time for round two,
It’s only because I’m addicted to you.
You said you were over thinking of me,
If that was true we’d stop texting till 3
AM in the morning I’m lying awake,
I think about you and I shiver and quake.
My heart was longing for comfort of you,
The only kind of love that I ever knew,
My first so I’m not sure I’ll ever find better,
But If I don’t try I’ll never know whether,
There’s someone out there waiting for me,
Who can show me how real love is supposed to be.





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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:50 am
Nice.
I still think of my ex, we still talk and laugh late at night.
I miss him, but I have another boyfriend who i THINK i love.
This is great.
 
tor10jax said...
Aug. 30, 2009 at 11:01 pm
Great job. I like how you got it to rhyme but didn't have the rhyming force you into a corner. In this poem everyline had significance which is something I still have to work on.
Keep writing!
 
alayapoetgirl said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 4:23 am
This is an awsome poem. You have great talent. And I read your profile...I want to write a book to. And own a book publishing company when i grow up. I also wanted to tell you that writers block is only a state of mind...
 
carolinet said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 5:04 pm
This is a really nice poem! I'm sure a lot of people can definitely relate. I love the rhyming as well
 
lindsey_O said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 9:01 pm
so touching! i loved it!
 
inloveconfused said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 6:23 pm
its touching i really loved it check out my poems He and His smile
 
amyxu said...
Jul. 9, 2009 at 5:16 pm
I get inspired to write poems a lot, too. Nice job with this one :)
 
iluvfruitbasket3 said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 10:20 pm
i can relate about being not sure if thier anyone else out thier who you can be with..
 
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