I’m Done With You

July 2, 2009
By camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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What’s the best way to get over this breakup?
I’ve fallen in love
We kissed and we’ve made up.
I said I forgave you for all that you did,
You said you were sorry for all that you hid,
Now I keep thinking it’s time for round two,
It’s only because I’m addicted to you.
You said you were over thinking of me,
If that was true we’d stop texting till 3
AM in the morning I’m lying awake,
I think about you and I shiver and quake.
My heart was longing for comfort of you,
The only kind of love that I ever knew,
My first so I’m not sure I’ll ever find better,
But If I don’t try I’ll never know whether,
There’s someone out there waiting for me,
Who can show me how real love is supposed to be.


The author's comments:
Thinking about my ex and I decided it was time to vent in the way I know best-poetry, I hope some other girls can relate and tell me thier stories, comments and feedback always welcome and appreciated! Thanks!

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on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:50 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Nice.

I still think of my ex, we still talk and laugh late at night.

I miss him, but I have another boyfriend who i THINK i love.

This is great.

tor10jax GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 11:01 pm
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Great job. I like how you got it to rhyme but didn't have the rhyming force you into a corner. In this poem everyline had significance which is something I still have to work on.

Keep writing!

on Jul. 30 2009 at 4:23 am
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

This is an awsome poem. You have great talent. And I read your profile...I want to write a book to. And own a book publishing company when i grow up. I also wanted to tell you that writers block is only a state of mind...

on Jul. 15 2009 at 5:04 pm
carolinet BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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This is a really nice poem! I'm sure a lot of people can definitely relate. I love the rhyming as well

Lindsey_O GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2009 at 9:01 pm
Lindsey_O GOLD, Marshfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Words slide off the lead,
creating permanent marks;
writer's secret code.
~Lindsey O'Connell

so touching! i loved it!

on Jul. 11 2009 at 6:23 pm
its touching i really loved it check out my poems He and His smile

amyxu said...
on Jul. 9 2009 at 5:16 pm
I get inspired to write poems a lot, too. Nice job with this one :)

KLD1992 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 10:20 pm
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
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i can relate about being not sure if thier anyone else out thier who you can be with..




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