Yes or No?

July 2, 2009
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)


This Is the Second Verse

Oh I love you so

but you just don't know

and I can't seem to tell you so

how I wish you would know

This Is the chorus

Oh but theres one thing I know

that I can't let you go

just have to let me know

Yes or No?

This is the Bridge

Sleep Deprived

lonely nights

tryn' to think what went right

coffee break

oh so late

Why can't I just get a date?

tellin' you tellin' me what we think we should be

Oh how stupid can I get?

then the chorus

Wrote you a song yesterday

Could hardly find the words to say

Then the chorus twice


The author's comments:
I'm Writing this Song and I thought I would post it to see how good it is

So tell me what you think

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on Oct. 19 2010 at 5:17 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

I know, i'm going to work on reposting it and making it more understandable.

hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 12:23 pm
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
10 articles 4 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge a Girl by Her Cover

its alittle confusing

 



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