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Never Can Say Goodbye

Never can say goodbye because,
I'll cry.
You should Know why.
You helped me when I was down.
You just turned my mood around.
You never made me frown.
You helped me.
You shared with me.
You cared for me.
I'll never forget you;
you should know that's true.
We just can't never be throw.
We're like super glue.
What I'm trying to say is,
I'm you friend
you mine.
I'm glad we intertwined.
I'm have to say I'll miss you so much.
Your just such.
A great person.
Your just so much fun.
That's why I don't want us to be done.
DON'T SAY GOODBYE!
PLEASE DON'T SAY GOODBYE!
OH NO,YOU SAID GOODBYE!
BUT WHY,
NOW I CRY!
BECAUSE I HAVE TO SAY GOODBYE!




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birdie said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 1:02 pm:
its different, but good different, ive had a couple people say goodbye and walk away and it helps if you remember that if they walked away from you, they didnt deserve you to begin with so dont let it get you down.
 
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SilverDawn said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 4:53 am:
pretty nice poem! but multiple grammar mistakes everywhere, sadly. and i think you're trying to put deep feelings in this poem but I couldn't help but laugh at the end. it ended up sounding like one end of a conversation and well, "please don't say goodbye!/ oh no, you said goodbye!/ but why/ now i cry!" i hope you get what i mean. it's kinda hard to explain but the poem's pretty good anyway (: keep writing~
 
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inloveconfused said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 5:31 am:
I have had few friends like this and i love them when friendship comes I'm just like Julia
 
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