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> I AM WALKING ON AN ENDLESS ROAD, THAT IS LEADING NOWHERE AT ALL.
> NO JOY, NO LOVE, JUST A MILE OF DESERT.
> I KNOW THAT I'M ALONE, ON A GLOOMY, GREY TRAIL.
> AS I RUN, I'M RUNNING FROM LIFE.
> NO ONE IS HOLDING MY HAND IN MY TRAVERSE:
> THAT IS WHAT STEALS LIGHT ON THE PATH.
> LOST COMPANIONS KEEPING THE WORLD DEAD.
> IF NOT SO, THE LAND /_WOULD_/ HAVE BEEN COLORFUL.
> THOUGH, NOW, I KNOW THAT I AM WRONG.
> BECAUSE IN THE DISTANCE, A NEW COLOR I SEE,
> I FEEL A REAL FEELING IN MY HEART:
> A RAY OF LIGHT IS JUST AHEAD -ON THE ENDLESS ROAD.



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elfiewrites said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 8:06 pm
I love this so much!! You have a talent for writing, and you should be VERY proud of yourself! Thank you so much for commenting on my article "Try To Remember." If you get the chance, may you please give me feedback on my newest article, "Is there Reason?" Thanks so much, and excellent work!
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 8:12 pm
Thanks Elfiewrites! Duh of course I'll read your new article! Has it been approved yet?
 
SageSin said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:38 am

this is striking to be SURE! YOur GREAT! *CLICKS FAVORITES BUTTON  A MILLION TIMES*   >.> 

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ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Lol, thanks!!!!!!!
 
dreamgirl01 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:01 am
u so good with poetry i keep on reading again and again good work
 
Laughternchoclate said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 9:28 am
Whoa!!!! You wrote this when you were TEN??? DANG! You're like amazing at writing. Do the capital letters signify something?? I really like this. Great job!!
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:00 am
Thanks so much! Well, I saved this in my computer, and when I posted this into Teenink, the arrows came on the sides, and it all went capital. Sorry, it was just perhaps a mistake. :)
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:01 am
And by the way, I'm twelve years old right now, so I wrote this two years ago.
 
citylightsgirl93 said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 10:58 pm
this was very well written!
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 9:35 am
Thanks all of you!
 
Emmaxoxo said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 10:55 am
great job! u did great. its a wonderful piece. hope to read more of ur writing pieces!
 
artandbooks16 said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 8:13 pm
wow thats was good!
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:02 am
Thanks so much!
 
ZAVERY said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 1:49 pm

thanks

 

 
josiebelle said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 12:05 pm
good imagery!!
 
Falling replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:44 pm
This is good. i like how it seems that the narrator has seemed to last hope, that life is nothing but a bleak gray road that never ends, and i like how you compoletly turn teh whole thing around with such easy adn flow. it's a really moving poem, makes me feel taht even when i think life isn't worth going on, that i shouldn't lose hope. Keep writing, you have alot of talent.
 
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