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> I AM WALKING ON AN ENDLESS ROAD, THAT IS LEADING NOWHERE AT ALL.
> NO JOY, NO LOVE, JUST A MILE OF DESERT.
> I KNOW THAT I'M ALONE, ON A GLOOMY, GREY TRAIL.
> AS I RUN, I'M RUNNING FROM LIFE.
> NO ONE IS HOLDING MY HAND IN MY TRAVERSE:
> THAT IS WHAT STEALS LIGHT ON THE PATH.
> LOST COMPANIONS KEEPING THE WORLD DEAD.
> IF NOT SO, THE LAND /_WOULD_/ HAVE BEEN COLORFUL.
> THOUGH, NOW, I KNOW THAT I AM WRONG.
> BECAUSE IN THE DISTANCE, A NEW COLOR I SEE,
> I FEEL A REAL FEELING IN MY HEART:
> A RAY OF LIGHT IS JUST AHEAD -ON THE ENDLESS ROAD.



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puppy said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 8:38 pm
yo-i like this alot!srsly how do u write theese things ?with a big imaginary system loll so  ya bye kido
 
Kittogo_Nashumi replied...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 1:00 pm

It reminds me a little of my life in middle school. I was bullied severely by a bunch of stuck up kids and all I wanted to do was die. Luckily, three years later, i moved away into a better life. I would like to see a continuation of this.

(Oh please rate my work, it's Walk softly down the endless road,. thank you.)

 
bobby said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 6:23 pm

well! haha. very funny &^nice poem ....

no need to thank huda~

 
Zavery_ replied...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 9:49 pm
I WILL thank you. Thank you!   =3
 
bobby replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 8:41 pm
OH MY GOD SUCH A ANOYING LIL BRAT IM JUST JK!!! my fellow frm school
 
bobby replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 8:42 pm
so guess who i am?? HUDA
 
Zavery_ replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 5:49 pm
What?????    =\ ....
 
Supernova7 said...
May 31, 2010 at 7:08 pm
This is good i like the end:) could you please comment and rate my work? it would mean alot to me
 
jonas_chic899 said...
May 7, 2010 at 7:44 am
aw i like how the ending has a glimmer of hope:] nicee poem
 
Zavery_ replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 9:53 pm
Thanks!!!! =)
 
phototfreak16 said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:37 pm
Thanks! It feels really great to have someone supporting my work!!
 
elfiewrites said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:07 pm
Yes, it has been approved! I really hope you enjoy it!
 
phototfreak16 said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:31 pm
I really liked this! I am going to post some more pictures (some are pending now) and poetry! I  think you definitely have talent!! Reading classics like Shakespeare, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Edgar Allan Poe, and Robert Frost rreally helped me understand different types of poetry!
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:48 pm
Wow! Thanks so much! I'm glad they're pending. I want to see some of your work soon. I personally love to see artwork more than anything else on Teenink.com!
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Wow! That's great! I hope to see more of ur work soon!
 
BobbysGirl said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 4:25 pm
i liked this! :}
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 4:56 pm
Thanks!!!!
 
BobbysGirl replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 9:44 pm
your welcome!!
 
JeanGrey said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:08 pm
*claps* Fabulous! :) I can relate ;) i know you commented on one of my poems but perhaps comment on the others? :) Thanks ;)
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:36 pm
Sure I will. Thanks for the comment! :)
 
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