July 1, 2009
By Alexandria Weissbach BRONZE, Bellevue, Washington
Alexandria Weissbach BRONZE, Bellevue, Washington
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Thank you for showing me the way
I’ll always remember that day in May
Your intentions as pure as the feathers on a dove
Everything you did was with love

I’m thankful and blessed that you were my friend
So much gratitude I feel toward you for lighting my path
For your act of kindness I have not fallen under Satan's wrath
In time, but not now, I’ll try and make amends

For now I’ll smile
Take everything by the mile
I’m sorry for acting so vile
I’ll try and lay down a new tile

Most of what you say causes me pain
Please, don't misunderstand I’m not trying to complain
The words, they hurt, remind me I’m not numb
If you ever need me, call, I’ll still come

Though this is hard to believe, you're in my prayers
I’m sorry I make you feel like the least of my cares
I’ve wrapped myself up in some foreign cocoon
Woven by some hated loom

I hope that we may be friends in time
Please remember you are worth much more to me than a dime
Thanks for your lovely light
But for now I must fetch my coat and bid you good night

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on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:10 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

This is such an awesome poem and has so much fluidity. You rock, so keep writing! I'd love to read more!

on Sep. 1 2009 at 1:51 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Oh my goodness!! You are so good and talented at writing poems!!!! How did you ever get so Good? Please, tell me I want to know!!!! I love how your words just flow together, and how much feeling this poem has!!! Please, check out my poems and works, and tell me how I can improve! I love your work, and mostly THIS poem!!!!! Thanks for writing it!!


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