The Rain and You

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Pitter, patter.
It lightly lands upon the roof.
The rain doesn’t bother me anymore.
I’ve never woken up without it before.

I listen to it quietly as I lay in my bed.
Thoughts ramble on about you,
From the very first day
To when our skies turned grey.

I lay there aloof
As I rest my heavy head.
Pitter, patter.
One thing I would like to say: the rain reminds me of you.





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cmoney1996 said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 7:15 pm
This was great and i like that it doesn't rhyme and that you saved you main focus to the end thanks for your comment on my poem
 
HurdlesStar said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 5:57 pm
This is a random rhyme poem that I made for English. The pattern is D B E E F C A A B F D C.
i hope you like it XD
 
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 4:57 am
wow, that was beautiful. and connecting the rain and grey skies to your relationship was unique and lovely. returning to the initial words was good too. great work! (:
 
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