The Rain and You

June 29, 2009
By LakeTownGirl GOLD, Lake Stevens, Washington
LakeTownGirl GOLD, Lake Stevens, Washington
13 articles 17 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss


Pitter, patter.
It lightly lands upon the roof.
The rain doesn’t bother me anymore.
I’ve never woken up without it before.

I listen to it quietly as I lay in my bed.
Thoughts ramble on about you,
From the very first day
To when our skies turned grey.

I lay there aloof
As I rest my heavy head.
Pitter, patter.
One thing I would like to say: the rain reminds me of you.



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on Sep. 24 2009 at 7:15 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This was great and i like that it doesn't rhyme and that you saved you main focus to the end thanks for your comment on my poem

on Jul. 21 2009 at 5:57 pm
LakeTownGirl GOLD, Lake Stevens, Washington
13 articles 17 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

This is a random rhyme poem that I made for English. The pattern is D B E E F C A A B F D C.

i hope you like it XD

on Jul. 17 2009 at 4:57 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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wow, that was beautiful. and connecting the rain and grey skies to your relationship was unique and lovely. returning to the initial words was good too. great work! (:




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