The World

June 19, 2009
Do you know?

Do you know the world is vast?

It is an unexplored sea,

waiting to be discovered, if by no one else, then by me.

Have you seen?

Have you seen the world's true colors?

The world's truth draws me in deep,

As i see the beautiful wonders and weep.

Can you hear?

can you hear the world whisper?

The winds play a beautiful song,

While nature sweetly sungs along.

How does it tast?

How does it tast, the air so sweet?

The aroma curls around my being,

Leaving behind a sensational feeling.

Does it feel?

Does it feel, the earth i wonder?

As we trash its land,

Is it hurt by mankind's killing hand?

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Mizotron said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 8:12 am
This is pretty good. :D just keep writing, just keep writing, just keep writing, writing, writing :) ~Nemo :D
Author101 said...
Jul. 23, 2009 at 3:37 am
thnx for the help, i must have mistyped because i wrote it all out correctly, guess i just need to check over my work next time thnx bout that :D and thnx for the comments
OoODerekOoO said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 5:25 pm
I like it. it's very good. you have a few spelling errors, but fix them, and your good to go. :) keep it up.
ZekeKana said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 5:20 pm
That was awesome it was stating a good point at the same time continue and youll do pretty well.
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