A poem for my true friends

June 19, 2009
You truly are a wonderful friend,
and i'd like to know you, until the end.
I'll be here for you forever and ever,
I'll be here for you through whatever,
whatever it is, that makes you fall,
I'll be there to catch you, through it all.
I'll be here for you until the end,
you truly are an amazing friend.

If you ever need to talk,
call me and we can take a walk.
A walk on the beach, by the setting sun,
I'll look in your eyes, and know you are one,
One of the people I truly will trust,
Even when everything's so unjust.
But I hope you'll be there to pull me through,
I'm very glad, That I met you.

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His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 3:27 pm
Very good poem! It was very well writen! Good job!
RandomNoel said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 1:51 am
OMIGOSH that was amazing! keep it up! i also wrote the begining of a song this past week @ camp... so i want you to read it.
OoODerekOoO said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 5:05 pm
Thanks Kj, and Thanks alot Arlene. :) i'm gonna try my best. =) And must have got some of my big heart from you, cuz you have one to. ;) =)
OoODerekOoO said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 11:31 pm
Thank you, both of you, i really appreciate it. =) and miss you to Stessy, i'll definitely tell you if i write a book. =);)
Arlene said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 11:23 pm
Derek - I like the poem very much. It reflects that you have a very big heart.

Keep writing and put the poems to music.
kj29 said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 10:59 pm
Fantastic Job, Derek!;-)
taylorann-marie said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 6:12 pm
hey! its your nice critic... lol nice poem! glad i found the website... very good and keep it up!
Stessyfrombelgium said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 5:48 pm
OH MY GOD Derek !!!!!!!
That poem is so beautiful.... I really enjoy it !!!!!!!!
i hope you will write a lot like that one because it s just an awesome poem !!!!!!!!
when you write a book, tell me and i ll buy one ^_^
miss you and good job :)
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