What Happens

June 19, 2009
By BabyV GOLD, Jachksoville, Florida
BabyV GOLD, Jachksoville, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
A really good poet write so that the reader can walk in their shoes just for that one minute. Victoria Jones


What happens to the voice never head
and the story untold
is it untold
or is it misunderstood
no one knows what that boy or girl could've been
and now can never be
when the young die
who knows what they could've been
Its like a bud that never grows into a flower
you never know how beautiful they could've been
Who knows how that child could've change the world
With that last minute
That one child soul is gone
With that last breath
and that last heart beat
well never know
What that child could've been
What happens to the voice unheard
and the story untold
During time that one child story eventually fades away
It's like that soul never existed
You never know what could've been
and know can never be
no no one knows the cry
of those who died to early
It's like a book without an ending
Its funny how the could've beens
would've beens and the should've beens
ended so fast
What happens to the voice never heard
and the story untold

The author's comments:
I just always hate seeing the young die so fast. In today world more and more people die everyday.

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love2run GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:28 am
love2run GOLD, Star Valley, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"I failed my way to success." Thomas Edison
"What kind of crazy nut would spend two or three hours a day just running?" Pre
"A ship in harbor is safe, but that's not what ships are built for." John Shedd

This is really great, it was deep!

BabyV GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 10:33 am
BabyV GOLD, Jachksoville, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
A really good poet write so that the reader can walk in their shoes just for that one minute. Victoria Jones

yea i know the first line is heard Bu t thanks for the reply

on Jun. 14 2010 at 9:42 am
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
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Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

This is really good. I like poems that make me think. What if's are usually good to work with in that sense. You have a few typos, I don't know why I'm pointing that out sice you can now do nothing! I have several in mine as well, I think it's so dumb we can't edit them after they've been posted!

on May. 23 2010 at 10:21 am
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

It's very cute but of course sad at the same time

 



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