June 29, 2009
White teeth
violet eyes
Red lips
Bright Smiles

Rouged cheeks
Tan skin
Flat stomachs
So thin

Add more sparkles
Add more rouge
Must be thinner
No more food

Painted Beauty
Is all they see
But do I want
That to be me?

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Like*Whoa!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 4:49 pm
i love it! it reminds me of the time my friend and i drew on all the models in her magazines cause we thought they were soooo pretty...and then we realized there was photoshop:) anyway, your poem really sums up our generation...good job
carolinet said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 8:22 am
this is a really nice poem
Matt R. said...
Jul. 9, 2009 at 5:25 am
I like the message of this poem. I do believe that the world has a false Idea of beauty.
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