nothing

By lover26, westminster, SC

i look and i see nothing. a empty pit of nothing. love is nonexsting where i live. hope is chushed. life is no where.we live in a empty
place. nothing,nothing,nothing. as far as the eye can see.

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SaraB. said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 5:52 pm:

You commented on my article (Not My Space) so I decided to check out your stuff. I like this, you managed to convey your point very powerfully in only eight sentances. I couldn't sum it up as well as you, I tend to be too wordy.