June 28, 2009
By lifeisabeautifullie BRONZE, West Brooklyn, Illinois
lifeisabeautifullie BRONZE, West Brooklyn, Illinois
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On an evening such as this
It never ceases to bring me bliss
For my eyes never seem to tire
To see the dusky sky all on fire

The sun has burned out in all her glory
Ending the day like a story
Dreamlike as the sky seems to be
Oh what a sight i love to see!

Long after the sun has went to bed
The sky is still hued with orange and red
Yet it still continues to burn with all its might
As a glorious prelude to the coming night

The author's comments:
This poem just came to me one night while I was watching the sun set, I noticed how the sky looked like it was on fire, it was just so beautiful.

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on Sep. 7 2009 at 6:41 pm
TheRightToDream SILVER, Fort Frances, Other
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Great poem :)

The imagery was solid. The mind picture you created was beautiful. Keep it up!

on Jul. 13 2009 at 11:24 pm
bluejay31 SILVER, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Amazing job! I really enjoyed it! You painted a clear picture in my mind! :) Keep it up!

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