June 28, 2009
On an evening such as this
It never ceases to bring me bliss
For my eyes never seem to tire
To see the dusky sky all on fire

The sun has burned out in all her glory
Ending the day like a story
Dreamlike as the sky seems to be
Oh what a sight i love to see!

Long after the sun has went to bed
The sky is still hued with orange and red
Yet it still continues to burn with all its might
As a glorious prelude to the coming night

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TheRightToDream This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 6:41 pm
Great poem :)
The imagery was solid. The mind picture you created was beautiful. Keep it up!
bluejay31 said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 11:24 pm
Amazing job! I really enjoyed it! You painted a clear picture in my mind! :) Keep it up!
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