Feeling Unofficial

June 27, 2009
By Jlevine BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
Jlevine BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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As the rain pours, i begin to think,
I begin to think about you and me.
At first you made me happy and feel special,
but now that i think about it you make me feel nothing.
I feel less,i feel hurt,sad,but most of all i feel unofficial.
Its crazy because this is only the beggining,
we were only at the beggining,we never even started actually.
Thats only because you didnt choose your words carefully.
Its hard to believe that you could make me feel this way, this feeling that truly made me forever and willing to stay.
Its an even harder thing to believe that you feel the same way,because your older than me.
Hey, what more can I say?
All I know is that I really liked you,
and I thought yhat maybe my day dreams would come true. Now that you know how I feel the rest is up to you.

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on Jul. 7 2009 at 2:57 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This was a tremendous poem. I like that you made it personal. And by reading this I understand what you felt inside. You are a great Poet that should actually consider writing a poetry book. Check out my poem called "The Girl I Stalked"

P.S When you get rich from your poetry remember me

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