Save Me

June 27, 2009
By cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

Save me from the hurt and the Pain!
Save me from the cocaine!
Save me from the Hell and the rain!
Save me from the gang!
Save me from the violence!
Save me from the racism, the criticism, the exorsism and the
Save me from all these babies and
the desease of rabbies!
Save me from the brutality and the
Save me from stavation,fustration,
assassination,drugnation,anailation,pooration, hospitalization!
Save me from this NATION!

The author's comments:
This is one of my favorite peoms from myself and please leave me a lot of COMMENTS!!!

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 12:40 pm
JasonsBaby GOLD, Spencer, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
when i get mad i tend to tell people to "go suck a fart"

I think this one was good too. and for a twelve year old you are really smart you used ALOT of big words, when i was twelve i probably couldnt of even told you the defenition of half those words, great job

on Jul. 19 2009 at 2:12 am
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
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It's a pretty good poem, but you might want to try to write a few poems that don't ryhme. Sometimes trying to use only words that ryhme limits what you can say.

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