Save Me

Save me from the hurt and the Pain!
Save me from the cocaine!
Save me from the Hell and the rain!
Save me from the gang!
Save me from the violence!
Save me from the racism, the criticism, the exorsism and the
gangsterism!
Save me from all these babies and
the desease of rabbies!
Save me from the brutality and the
criminality!
Save me from stavation,fustration,
assassination,drugnation,anailation,pooration, hospitalization!
Save me from this NATION!





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birdie said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 12:40 pm
I think this one was good too. and for a twelve year old you are really smart you used ALOT of big words, when i was twelve i probably couldnt of even told you the defenition of half those words, great job
 
sunnysyd This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2009 at 2:12 am
It's a pretty good poem, but you might want to try to write a few poems that don't ryhme. Sometimes trying to use only words that ryhme limits what you can say.
 
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