Little Love

June 26, 2009
Didn’t believe you were really gone,
Couldn’t understand the tune to this song.
Didn’t wanna play the sad harmony,
Just wanted to see you free.

Never again could you hold my hand,
Dance across the open land,
Hold you in my arms so tight,
Protecting you from terrors of the night.

My little child,
So frail so small,
To hold you again,
Would fix it all.

My love for you
Is an everlasting one
Please come back,
Your mamma’s home.

I wanna see you grow real tall,
Live your life how you want to.
Get into a fight over something small,
The come to me to cure it all.

Please come home,
My little love,
You’ve got a life,
You should’ve lived.

Here or not,
My love runs hot,
You will always live on,
In the memories I hold.

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laRaMeii said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 7:16 pm
wow. that was simply beautiful. sad. and emotional. KEEP WRITING!! love your stuff
dahottgeek said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 12:50 pm
thanks guys :)
EdytD said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:43 pm
This is a very emotional piece, and well-written. Nice job!
tor10jax said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 7:14 pm
Awww :'(. That was amazing. I'm so sorry.
Keep writing!
amyxu said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 4:09 pm
This is a well-crafted piece and it's really touching. Good job!
dahottgeek said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 8:53 pm
BTW: I wrote this, not as a teenage mother who lost a child, but as a way to acknowledge all the children who die before they ever live- like my sister, Ribbon. I love you.
Heyhey said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 2:26 pm
What a sad poem...
Darothy1133 said...
Jul. 9, 2009 at 1:46 am
Wow, that was amazing. You are an excellent writer.
lindsey_O said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 6:31 pm
wow that was amazing! it was so touching! i absolutely loved it! you have a real gift!
LaurryWebs said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 1:32 pm
So touching, sad, deep, and full of true emotion.
JULY4 said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 12:57 am
This is extremely touching and well written.
JollyILU said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 2:07 am
That was the saddest thing I EVER read. So touching.
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