Why Dont You see

June 26, 2009
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why dont you see how much i care?
why do you look at me with a blank stare?
i know how hard life can be
not everything in life comes easy
why dont you see how much you hurt me
why cant you see the plays that i lead?

why do you hurt yourself like this?
why must you punch me with an invisible fist?
i can see you better than anyone

i can see that you're coming undone
you're losing it all, and some you cant help
but others you can and you refuse my help.

why dont you see how much pain you have caused?
why do i still care when others call you a lost cause?
why dont you see that i am still here for you
fighting and yelling until i am black and blue
why cant you see that you're not alone
why cant you see i put you on a throne

why cant you see im afraid of losing it all
this isn't a small jump it's a really big fall

why cant you see that i love you no matter what
why dont you listen to your heart or your gut?

why cant you see that im pleading and begging?
why cant you see that im so tired of pretending?
i know the truth and yes, it does hurt.
but you're not alone and i am here for you always.
im here to help you my dear friend.

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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 7:07 pm
awww this is soo good.
im exactly like that with all my friendz ;)
we'd do anything 4 each other.
plz keep writing!!
i absolutely luvv this :P
Sunshine:D said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 12:13 pm
This exactly like you of my friends! Read mine, life goes around. It's not good or like yous but it's about her. I'm really really glad i found this! It's going on my favorites:) Keep writing!
Chrissy L. replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 12:23 pm
thank you for adding it on your favorites it means a lot & im glad that you liked it :] and i did read you life goes round and i really liked it and commented on it also.
Sunshine:D replied...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 12:48 am
I saw that. Thanks:) I like your others too.
Chrissy L. replied...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 6:18 pm
thank you & im glad that you like them. :]
cleigh R. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 10:34 pm
aww...geee...thank you very much :) im glad you like it.
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 5:58 pm
oh. my. gawsh. every single word is awesome. the way you word things and the way you string your words together... i love it <3 i just love it. this is definately going on my favourites. good work! (:
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