Cutting Obsesion

June 25, 2009
By sadie long BRONZE, Tonasket, Washington
sadie long BRONZE, Tonasket, Washington
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I cut deeper ,and deeper! The farther i go the less pain i feel. I love seeing the blood droping from my veins. The veins bursting from under my razor's edge. i love the feeling of seeing my blood dropping to the floor and the razor eching against my bone sawing in deeper and deeper... I dont why but i keep going and going farther and farther in to my arm to fill the sensation of the razor cutting my flesh and leaving scars behind! This is my cutting obsesion!


The author's comments:
i think it relates to the depressed teenage population!

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on Jan. 13 2011 at 10:34 am
lovemeloser59 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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I really Like This, Its The Saem Way I Feel !

on Nov. 3 2010 at 6:29 pm
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

good poem. im not trying to be mean but i just want to add a little advice: cutting is a scary thing, but the mood of your poem and all the exclamation points make it seem easy and fine. just a suggestion. keep writing!


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