wrap me

June 24, 2009
By poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"


wrap me in those arms that give me nothing but warmth.

kiss me with those lips that are softer than babies skin.

look at me with those eyes that shine brighter than the moon.

talk to me with that breath that smells so fresh.

hug me with that smooth clean flesh



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Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 6:37 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

I like your poems but i think you should try doing something a little darker. Not just about love and heart break... Go toward another kind of relationship or just life in gerneral and see how you do. I like sometimes just to pick a random instance in my life and dewell there and embellish the details. Take a look at some of my stuff alot of it is about death and love but not gorey or freaky or anything. One of the most indept and true ones is tranger in my house its long but worth reading. And red velevet is my favorite love one but people seem to love abandonment. I'd appreciate any comment




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