Beneath It All MAG

June 24, 2009
By alexisabandoned GOLD, Kingsley, Pennsylvania
alexisabandoned GOLD, Kingsley, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one so I never have to live without you." - Winnie the Poo (A. A. Milne)


Smile on her face,
a cry deep inside.
Wrists never exposed,
too much to hide.
Scars on the surface,
burning in flesh.
Hope to just let it go,
wish to start fresh.


The author's comments:
I had a friend who would sometimes cut herself and she confided in me. This friend got help and now is doing much better. This piece is my understanding- from what she described to me- of what was going through her head.

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on Feb. 4 2010 at 9:34 am
this poem has a lot of pain beneath it and if youve ever ben in this kind of situation(excuse my spelling) Then you understand completely about this poem. I find this poem brings up alot of old emotions for me, (even tho its small) because ive felt the same way. but it is possible to start fresh(:.

on Feb. 1 2010 at 12:17 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

if your friend was able to get help, she's very lucky. :) this is a good poem. keep writing.




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