So much pain

June 24, 2009
By tweety097 BRONZE, Montgomery, Alabama
tweety097 BRONZE, Montgomery, Alabama
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My body tired and restless
Heart is troubled
How do I relieve my pain?

A lot of things on my mind
So much pain!
"My heart is puzzled"
"Broke up in little pieces"
yet so much pain!

"Crying on the inside but laughing
on the out."
No tears falling
Feelings eating away at me
Still so much pain!

I live one day at a time,
feels like I would never stiop hurting
"But forever my heart will
always worry"
trying to clear my heart
so much pain!

"I will one day finally save
my problem
Now I know why my pieces
need a fix and my pieces
shouldn't shader anymore
so much pain!!!

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on Jul. 3 2009 at 5:34 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I've totally felt like this before. i love how this poem is constructed and i like the consistancy. Keep it up!!


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