Longing Love

By , Commack, NY
Your tears run hot
Down my back
Though I meant what I said
I want to take it back

You make me cry
When you are mad
I try to tell you
I’m not that bad

Sometimes you hurt me
You even smile
Just please love me
Love me awhile

I need your trust
Your love, hate too
But most of all,
I need you





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dahottgeek said...
Jul. 10, 2009 at 12:33 pm
fantastic never read a better poem luv it! u hav talent poem of the day by far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
lexi10824 said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 2:16 am
Hey Anonamys, I love this poem! I'm going to check out more of your stuff. You should definately keep writing. You got some talent. Check out some of my stuff and tell ur friends about it..I would love the rating to go up! Good job..lots of emotion!
 
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