The Guy Is Dead

June 22, 2009
The soldiers walked down the road,

Afraid a bomb would soon explode,

Sweat dripped down their faces

They had been searching in many different places

Their rifles hung in their arms ready to fire,

the criminal would be disguised, a dangerous liar.

For a moment, the sun shone into a soldier’s eyes,

In the distance could be heard agonizing cries

Suddenly, a shot was heard, and a soldier cried out.

The bullet flew very fast, and bounced all about.

It hit poor Jimmy, he would die without a doubt

They all took cover, MEDIC! Someone did shout.

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People_call_me_tazz said...
Jul. 10, 2009 at 9:19 pm
People, please read this poem. I worked very hard on this poem so that it would shine. PLease take this oppurtunity to check out my work. Also, please comment on if you liked it or not. Give me some constructive criticism. How can I make it better? Thanks so much. ~♥♥♥~
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