I'm Not Like You

June 23, 2009
I’m not like you,
So don’t expect much
I can’t do
What you do with such
Zest and zeal
Strength and appeal
I make mistakes all the time
You rarely do and when so
They’re not as great as mine
Where I fall short
You excel
So I guess,
I’m not like you

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cariberry24 said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 6:45 am
I love your poem. It is short and concise, but it has depth and emotion. Your word choice and rhyme scheme are wonderful! Keep up the great work! :)
and thanks for your comment on my poem, I really appreciate it. It's exactly what I needed to hear: "don't let anyone put you down. they're just trying to degrade you. keep your head up, and keep those poems coming!"
pedrozag said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 11:14 pm
tht poem was good. oh and thanx for reading my poems and liking them for some odd reason
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