I'm Not Like You

June 23, 2009
By -xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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I’m not like you,
So don’t expect much
I can’t do
What you do with such
Zest and zeal
Strength and appeal
I make mistakes all the time
You rarely do and when so
They’re not as great as mine
Where I fall short
You excel
So I guess,
I’m not like you



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carijoy SILVER said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 6:45 am
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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I love your poem. It is short and concise, but it has depth and emotion. Your word choice and rhyme scheme are wonderful! Keep up the great work! :)

and thanks for your comment on my poem, I really appreciate it. It's exactly what I needed to hear: "don't let anyone put you down. they're just trying to degrade you. keep your head up, and keep those poems coming!"

on Jul. 1 2009 at 11:14 pm
darkangel1326 GOLD, Paramount, California
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tht poem was good. oh and thanx for reading my poems and liking them for some odd reason


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