Need You

June 21, 2009
By SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me


A rainbow of life
A light in the dark
No more shattered dreams
You're in my heart

A chorus of hope
A summer wish
Swimming through a life parade
Like a dreaming fish

Clattered desires
Won't you come here
With you around
No reason to fear

The attic of thoughts
Stories untold
Watching as life
Slowly unfolds

Catching a glimpse
Eyes on the prize
Don't even care
What's wrong and what's right

All that I need
Is you by my side
To forget all the times
I feared and I cried


The author's comments:
I write whatever comes to mind in my stories and poems. I hope one day to also have a book published. If I ever do, my Best Friend Shannon is getting the first autographed copy..lol!

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on Oct. 14 2009 at 2:02 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

Thank you all for taking the time to comment, how can I fix it?

on Oct. 13 2009 at 6:48 pm
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide

its pretty good but it does need a bit of work!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 5:30 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

How can I fix it?

on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:09 pm
Anonymous BRONZE, Colorado Spring, Colorado
3 articles 6 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I hope someday somebody wants to hold you for 20 minutes straight and that's all they do. They don't pull away. They don't look at your face. They don't try to kiss you. All they do is wrap you up in their arms and hold on tight, without an ounce of selfishness to it.

I was confused the whole time, needs work.

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:12 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

I have lot's of work pending approval!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:10 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

Thank you so much!!!!! I will work on that!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:01 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
29 articles 0 photos 85 comments
oh, and i love ur icon!!!! lol it is adorable! :D

on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:55 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
29 articles 0 photos 85 comments
Wow that poem is awesome! the only thing i would say is that some of the words don't rhyme, like "dark" and "heart", "untold" and "unfolds" and "Prize" and right". i used to do that then my english teacher taught us about poetry and i learned how even tho it sounds like it rhymes it has to be exact... it's no biggy, though,it's just for the future. otherwise i really love the feeling, and the last 2 lines are so powerful! :D good job and please publish something else soon!


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