The Day Before Summer At Brown Betty

June 21, 2009
By Terrance Jones BRONZE, Upper Darby, Pennsylvania
Terrance Jones BRONZE, Upper Darby, Pennsylvania
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Brown Betty’s Jeans Road Trip took my taste buds on an adventurous road trip

A long ride from West Philly to try something I knew nothing about

I’ve been to other bakeries before and had brownies cakes and so on

As I walked down Liberties Walk in Northern Liberties

I smelled Brown Betty calling me

I had the feeling that I was in my grandma’s kitchen

I saw wonderful cakes in the display cabinet

I saw cake batter that was being whipped

Then I sampled a Red Velvet and Hey Thelma

Mel ordered me Jeans Road Trip
it was nice warm and made to perfection

I took one bite and I went on a southern road trip

And when I took my last bite
I came back to the north to end my road trip


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Mr. Barry said...
on Jun. 30 2009 at 8:12 pm
Terrance:



Well done on yet another really wonderrul poem. The way your wrote about the desserts make me want to visit the cake shop myself.



Congrats on being a fine poet and a published poet.




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