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Please Can I Have That Guy? This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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By Janelle Z., Plainfield, NJ
Photo credit: Jennifer N., Chickasha, OK
Please can I have that guy who sings to me?
Please can I have that guy
Who knows how to raise my cheekbones from ear to ear in the most unfeasible situations
Who doesn’t mind my immense eating habit and finds it to be intriguing
Wondering why the food doesn’t stick
Like nectar on bees
Who makes me the only dirt cakes from scratch which he says he put his whole foot in
Who walks like cocky Tyson Beckford with his superlative swagger across the catwalk
Who recalls my every knock-knock joke and has them all stored in the back of his mind like a FedEx package
Originated from my inner Dave Chappelle
Ready to be delivered out the soles of his lips,
To be mutual between us once again –
And no one can interpret this but us because
It’s our little secretive jest
Who keeps that Orbit fresh breath and ­Colgate smile;
Who talks like a baby Barry White, with his assuring
Big daddy tone in preparation of a slow ­seduction
Of my mind mentally silent from the world;
Who knows that bombarding me with ­compliments
Like an overflowing sullied toilet filled with feces, urine, gum, and hair
Is just too typical: please can I have that guy friend
Who knows that I don’t want that.
Who is not prepared to change himself to ­appease me.
Who, when I collapse to the floor like an iron-lacking anemic
While broken with tears and moaning like an abused milked cow
That enjoys nothing but the fresh dry grass
From the vast fields of the suffering and ­polluted earth used and abused,
Picks me up like a strong lion would grab his cub in the clutch of its mouth.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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nette2010 said...
Nov. 6 at 3:09 pm:

I LOVE THE POEM ITS SWEET BUT IDNT THINK ITS FINISHED

 
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Peace_seeker said...
Oct. 4 at 6:48 pm:

Soooo, for the most part I liked it... After all it's a million times better than anything I could write, but I think it needs somthing more...

 
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MariaMarie said...
Sep. 7 at 3:41 pm:

This is awesome, the first time I read it I fell in love with it but didn't have time to comment- so i bookmarked the page, I'm glad i did :) This is going into my favs! Could you read a couple of my poems please? One is "Neither of Us" And the other is "Afraid Of Always Loving You" ?

 
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Annisah T. said...
Sep. 6 at 3:53 pm:

that wouild be wonderful to have that feeling again

 
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LIV2011 said...
Aug. 28 at 1:42 am:

so different, so good, so clever, love it.

 
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corshaaa29 said...
Aug. 26 at 10:40 pm:

I personally loved this poem, you put everything about the perfect man in one poem!!! Wow, this is amazing and breath taking, and it's so crazy because my boyfriend is just like this. I'm going to let him read it !!! GREAT JOB: %Pr

 
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~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Aug. 26 at 8:33 pm:

ahmazing!!! :)

 
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aspiring.author.09 said...
Aug. 24 at 6:41 am:

I wish this comment could be coming from the mouth of someone famous: BRILLIANT!!! Formidable, great job.

 
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Shauna said...
Aug. 14 at 7:03 pm:

i love this poem maybe..you can help me with some of mines:)

 
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!!starstrukk!! said...
Aug. 11 at 3:36 am:

wow. thats all i can say. good job

 
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Schubster said...
Aug. 8 at 10:50 pm:

keep writing :) awesome poem

 
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munchkinrocks said...
Jul. 29 at 7:22 pm:

wow. this is a really nice poem=]

 
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Rachel N. said...
Jul. 26 at 8:40 pm:

its the truth of love,
and its absolutely perfect.
its life in your eyes,
and now we can all see it.
well done.

 
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BillyJoeBobKellyGeorge said...
Jul. 25 at 6:39 pm:

hahaha hopefully you get your dream guy. i heart your poem <3

 
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JacintaT said...
Aug. 15 at 4:36 am:

i love how you wrote so deeply into, describing everything.
Its realistic and, as other people have said, has the sad humour to it.

 
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LPWHill said...
Jul. 23 at 6:50 pm:

Wow!! I'm totally blow away by your words!! When you find that guy..let me know if he has an older single father!! LOL

 
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marykate:) said...
Jul. 21 at 1:20 pm:

good work:)i agree with pretty much everyone, it was amazing!

 
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Angela said...
Jul. 20 at 11:39 pm:

This is an amazing piece...well written!

 
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Melinda L. said...
Jul. 16 at 11:23 pm:

Wow. I am practically speechless. I still have to tell you what I think of it, though. It was so... incredible...no, I can't think of a word that describes what I think of this poem. But I love it because it it so true and very well written. Great Job!

 
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SmollyCelmore said...
Jul. 15 at 1:30 am:

Wow. That's frigging amazing. Right on. This is beautiful.

 
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one_of_a_kind_girl said...
Jul. 11 at 6:33 am:

Love it. Very, very, very, very well written.

 
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xxqt327xx said...
Jul. 10 at 1:35 am:

wow. that was amazing!! i luved it!

 
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LilJ<3 said...
Jul. 7 at 11:38 pm:

love the imagery. continue to write this was great and i believe that u can go far.

 
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annkaykay2011 said...
Jul. 5 at 4:44 am:

It was breathtaking...No wonder it was published!
It has that sad humor to it,
that romance you can't forget,
that lost truth,
but you no it so well.
I love it~!

 
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sunsetclimber said...
Jul. 1 at 9:32 pm:

nicely done, it is an amazing poem.

 
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-xlimitless239x- said...
Jul. 1 at 4:28 am:

keep 'em going!! good work (-:

 
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IanG. said...
Jun. 30 at 7:19 pm:

I like it!

 
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Duckie430 said...
Jul. 6 at 3:23 pm:

wow. absolutely amazing.

 
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