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Thank you everyone for the comments and suggestions, everything is helpful! :)
i like it.it describes everyone on teen ink pretty well.
great poem :) i think the title fits everyone on Teenink. again, great job and keep writing.
I think when you wrote "shaping my poetry (slowly)
to what I want it to
look like"
Having the "look like" on another line is incredibly tacky. It stops the reader in their tracks and makes them spew. But putting it in the line above gives it a great sense of dictation and dicipline.
Otherwise, its fantastic, and I really reccomend you keep going.
briliant? ITS WICKED! i <3d it tons.
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kayla
The diction fits well with what youre talking about, however the words you used to say them with were not the best, in my opinion. Maybe an extended metaphor would be better here.
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