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Child of the Snow (Snow Angel) This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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By Elizabeth R., Auburn, CA
Photo credit: Susannah B., Greenwich, CT
You spin in diamond
Pale as the snow you came from
Spring sends you away
This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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Niccole C. said...
Sep. 14 at 4:19 pm:

I like it a lot

 
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hotpink_girl200 said...
Aug. 19 at 7:53 pm:

sweet simple and beautiful

 
samantha.rose replied...
Sep. 7 at 7:09 am :

of course its simple... its a haiku poem.
duh.

 
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Ramna said...
Aug. 14 at 1:31 am:

Very nice. Class all the way. Read my work? Please don't hesitate to comment. Thanks.

 
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babe892 said...
Aug. 8 at 7:22 am:

The title of this reminded me of the Elliott Smith song "Snow Angel", so in reading it, I was almost expecting something similar just because the title sort of called that to mind. And let me tell you, I wasn't disappointed. Short, simple, to the point, but very poignant.

 
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Samantha G. said...
Jul. 26 at 9:20 pm:

great haiku

 
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MorningStar15 said...
Jul. 26 at 1:13 am:

Simple so simple! but soooo soooo beautiful...

 
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Angel*music*lover said...
Jul. 21 at 5:24 pm:

I really love how you can say what you want to in little words. it is perfect!

 
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Melinda L. said...
Jul. 17 at 12:00 am:

that was sweet and simple. nice job!

 
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