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I choose you

If I had to choose between you and life. I would say my final goodbye. I realy hope it would be quick I couldn't stand to hear you cry. As long as you were my last sight it would have been all worth while. As long as my memory doesn't fade a picture of you loving smile. As long as I felt your warm touch on my slowly chilling flesh. Well then it would have been all worth it to take my last BREATHE.



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ProdigalDaughter said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 1:22 am:
loved it!!! very romantic.
 
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okie-dokie said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 2:36 am:
Yeah I love writing ,but lets just say I'm not the best when it come to spelling. Plus when I wrote this it was eight oclock in the morning and I hadn't sleep all night.
 
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ProdigalDaughter said...
Jun. 28, 2009 at 3:03 am:
Man I got the shivers. Beautiful!

Read mine? TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/112851/Caution-May-Contain-Karma/
 
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Grania This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 26, 2009 at 6:07 pm:
This is really sweet and whistful. Breath is spelled without an E, though.
 
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SilverDawn said...
Jun. 26, 2009 at 4:20 am:
That was really good! Just a few spelling errors here and there but the meaning is so lovely (: the rhymes are so perfectly put into lines that make perfect sense and sound... again, perfect !
 
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awesomeaugust This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 8:09 pm:
really sweet (and good!)
 
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