I choose you

June 19, 2009

If I had to choose between you and life. I would say my final goodbye. I realy hope it would be quick I couldn't stand to hear you cry. As long as you were my last sight it would have been all worth while. As long as my memory doesn't fade a picture of you loving smile. As long as I felt your warm touch on my slowly chilling flesh. Well then it would have been all worth it to take my last BREATHE.


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on Jul. 31 2009 at 1:22 am
ProdigalDaughter SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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loved it!!! very romantic.

on Jul. 30 2009 at 2:36 am
superduper-emo-pancakes SILVER, Hawley, Texas
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Yeah I love writing ,but lets just say I'm not the best when it come to spelling. Plus when I wrote this it was eight oclock in the morning and I hadn't sleep all night.

on Jun. 28 2009 at 3:03 am
ProdigalDaughter SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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Man I got the shivers. Beautiful!



Read mine? TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/112851/Caution-May-Contain-Karma/

on Jun. 26 2009 at 6:07 pm
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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This is really sweet and whistful. Breath is spelled without an E, though.

on Jun. 26 2009 at 4:20 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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That was really good! Just a few spelling errors here and there but the meaning is so lovely (: the rhymes are so perfectly put into lines that make perfect sense and sound... again, perfect !

on Jun. 25 2009 at 8:09 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt

really sweet (and good!)


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