Forever and Always

June 19, 2009
By BlackRoses SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
BlackRoses SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
You're intoxicated by my very prescence.


Hold me in your arms
(Don't ever let me go)
Ask you to kiss my lips
(And never say no)
Feel the warmth against our bodies
(I can see the fire)
Let me look at your face
(And hold you tighter)
Let me see into your eyes
(Do they tell the truth)
Can't you see that I'm
(Just in love with you.)


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on Jun. 26 2009 at 6:11 pm
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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I really like the content of this poem. I feel like its rhythm is a little bit off...when I read it it didn't come easily off my tongue. But I love the use of parenthesis and the emotion in it.


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