Hidden Angel

June 18, 2009
By lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments

The wind is blowing around me,
it reminds of that presence that you brought.
I feel sorrow with you not near.
I need your guidance,
so that I won't fear.

With you unable to do what you used to,
it reminds me how I really love you.

I loved how you used to make me laugh.
But now that's all in the past.
A perfect couple-some might say,
has drowned like a small child in a bay.

I'm scared to think what we could've been.
Because it makes me mourn about the good things we did.

Laughing, playing, having fun,
dreaming, kissing in the sun.
Sleeping overnight under the moon,
but sadly we didn't have a clue.
That a tragedy would strike somehow,
and that you'd not be here to see me now.

All those nights that I cried in bed,
made it worse than had been said.
I realized that you and me would never again be.
But I can feel-even still today,
that you will be watching over me.


The author's comments:
Hey! I'm alexa. I'm not a big reader, but I love to write; especially poetry. You can really express yourself in a good way. <3

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on Oct. 18 2009 at 12:02 am
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments
Thx. :) It has a lot of emotion, and reading it again after a few months, makes me thing of all that went on.

kylove GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 2:35 am
kylove GOLD, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Principles only mean something if you stick by them when they're inconvenient,"
- Laine Hanson (Joan Allen) in The Contender (written by Rod Lurie)

Hey thanx for the comment

sorry for being so late to get back to you.

You're right this is some of ur best work. Love it. Even if your love is defeated maybe you can be happy about something after it! :] Good job and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

trumpetzetc. said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 4:42 am
This is an absolutely excellent poem. It is beautiful and brings tears to my eyes.

kj90 said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 2:15 am
nice...

on Jul. 2 2009 at 5:45 am
karabear SILVER, Westland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
No joke!

hey..um...this is one is pretty good too:) btw,thx for the comment,,,and the poem i wrote wasn't real,it was ina dream of mine about someone i like.

on Jul. 2 2009 at 4:43 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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I really love this poem, it's great!!! keep it up :)

on Jun. 29 2009 at 2:46 am
this is a good poem. its really compassionit. good job

on Jun. 28 2009 at 2:46 am
JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
11 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what is right, even if you are standing alone.

this is a powerful peice and i luv it!!

on Jun. 27 2009 at 4:37 am
JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
11 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what is right, even if you are standing alone.

hey... this peice really made me feel. u know? keep writen lex




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