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The wind is blowing around me,
it reminds of that presence that you brought.
I feel sorrow with you not near.
I need your guidance,
so that I won't fear.

With you unable to do what you used to,
it reminds me how I really love you.

I loved how you used to make me laugh.
But now that's all in the past.
A perfect couple-some might say,
has drowned like a small child in a bay.

I'm scared to think what we could've been.
Because it makes me mourn about the good things we did.

Laughing, playing, having fun,
dreaming, kissing in the sun.
Sleeping overnight under the moon,
but sadly we didn't have a clue.
That a tragedy would strike somehow,
and that you'd not be here to see me now.

All those nights that I cried in bed,
made it worse than had been said.
I realized that you and me would never again be.
But I can feel-even still today,
that you will be watching over me.





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gurujufu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2009 at 2:35 am
Hey thanx for the comment
sorry for being so late to get back to you.
You're right this is some of ur best work. Love it. Even if your love is defeated maybe you can be happy about something after it! :] Good job and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
 
trumpetzetc. said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 4:42 am
This is an absolutely excellent poem. It is beautiful and brings tears to my eyes.
 
lexi10824 replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 12:02 am
Thx. :) It has a lot of emotion, and reading it again after a few months, makes me thing of all that went on.
 
kj90 said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 2:15 am
nice...
 
~Jaguarbby~ said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 5:45 am
hey..um...this is one is pretty good too:) btw,thx for the comment,,,and the poem i wrote wasn't real,it was ina dream of mine about someone i like.
 
xXxFallingTearsxXx said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 4:43 am
I really love this poem, it's great!!! keep it up :)
 
lovnpikls537956 said...
Jun. 29, 2009 at 2:46 am
this is a good poem. its really compassionit. good job
 
JamminJos23 said...
Jun. 28, 2009 at 2:46 am
this is a powerful peice and i luv it!!
 
JamminJos23 said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 4:37 am
hey... this peice really made me feel. u know? keep writen lex
 
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