Summer's Luster

June 17, 2009
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Fresh cut grass
Dirt between my toes
Budding rose
Jumping fish
Chocolate ice cream in a dish
Ever-present chlorine smell
On thoughts of Fall no mind can dwell
Summer's luster fades fast
Summer fun can never last

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Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 10:12 pm
agrees with project827..... the poems and stories are short, sweet, to the point and page turners.
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 3:32 pm
I LOVE THIS!!! again your work amazes me :) this is just how i think of summer. your writing is so true and i love this piece. lol i may print it off and keep it in my locker when i wish it was still summer ;) your writing hasn't let me down yet so keep writing!
project827 said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 5:42 pm
i love how all your poems are short and to the point. i'm not much of a summer person myself, but this is probably my favorite poem of yours. keep up the good work.
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